Mari Illustrious Makinami vs. Asuka Langley Soryu

A loud battling was heard between two EVA pilots, Asuka Langley Soryu and Mari Illustrious Makinami.

Asuka was a redheaded German with an anger only matched by her beauty.

She wore a red knee length coat, pink shirt, purple trousers, black boots and white socks.

She also had a pair of panties the same color as her hair.

Mari had cut off Asuka’s left hand, and fed it to a large Crocodile which upon eating it thought it tasted delicious.

He now followed her everywhere in hopes of devouring her.

As the two pilots fought there way along the cliff edge Mari suddenly grabbed Asuka’s hat and pushed it around her waist.

Angered by this, Asuka slammed her sword down at Mari who parried with her dagger and the two started walking slowly back.

Asuka, now feeling smug, stated “I’ve got you this time, Mari...”

Mari however pulled away and pointed down.

Asuka, confused by this, looked down herself and saw that she had walked right off the edge of the cliff!

And whilst Mari could fly, Asuka could not!

Asuka screamed as she kicked her legs frantically through the air in order to gain height.

She just barely managed to get her hook embedded into the cliff and now hung, helplessly above the water.

Mari, seeing this, decided to taunt her opponent by saying “Well, well, a gingerfish on a hook.”.

Asuka, upon hearing this, shot a humiliated glare of frustration and shouted “I’ll get you for this, Mari! Even if it’s the last thing I do!”

Eventually a new sound began to fill the cavern known as Skull Rock.

Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock...

Mari, hearing this first, asked the redhead, “ I say Asuka, do you hear something?”

The German girl let out a cry of horror

“No!” She screamed.

She glanced down, and to her fear, she saw the Crocodile smiling at her hungrily.

This was the same one that had eaten her hand previously, and he had found her so tasty that he now wanted her again.

“NO!!” Asuka screamed again as the Crocodile readied himself beneath her to get her in his mouth.

“NOOOOOOO!!!” Asuka cried out as the Crocodile jumped out of the water to get a bite of her.

SNAP!

The Crocodile landed back in the water with the end of Asuka’s coat in his jaws.

Satisfied with the current morsel, the Crocodile started chewing the clothing, smacking his lips and eyeing Asuka as he did so.

The Crocodile then swallowed the remains of it and licked his lips at the taste of Asuka on it.

It was delicious as always!

Mari, seeing this whole thing unfolding, decided to have a little bit of fun “Oh, Mr. Crocodile. Do you like gingerfish?”

The reptile responded by nodding his head and wagging his tail excitedly as he grinned at Asuka above him.

“You do?!” Mari said with a hint of surprise in her voice as she raised her foot as if to give a kick to Asuka’s hook.

“Oh Mari, must you?!” bemoaned Shinji Ikari from the nearby rowboat.

Mari responded with a trolling grin “Aww, come on, Shinji... I’m not gonna do anything. The Crocodile will! Besides, she deserves it after all she's done to you...”

The Crocodile then leapt up at Asuka again and this time bit into her trousers, pulling them down her legs.

Asuka, seeing this, began trying to pull them back up causing her to lose her hold on the cliff and start falling, screaming all the way down to the Crocodile below, who had already opened his mouth to catch her.

SNAP!

The Crocodile closed his jaws around Asuka and submerged himself below the water.

All was quiet until the Crocodiles head burst out from the water, Asuka in his mouth holding his jaws far apart with her clothes tattered and partially eaten away.

“SHINJIIIII!” Asuka hollered as she attempted to climb out the Crocodile's jaws.

“Hold on Asuka, I’m coming! Hold on now!” Shinji stammered.

Asuka had by now climbed out of the Crocodile's jaws as his tongue curled in as if inviting the red head into his mouth.

She had half her coat and shirt left, her trousers were now shorts and the seat of them was eaten away exposing her panties.

“SHIIIIINJIIIII!” Asuka screamed as the hungry reptile started snapping his jaws trying to make Asuka lose her balance.

'''SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!'''

“SHINJI PLEASE SAVE MEEEEE!”  Asuka cried out as she lost out to the Crocodile and fell back into his jaws.

Asuka, now back in the Crocodile's maw, started trying to walk out of his mouth as she pressed her hands against his upper jaw in order to avoid being bitten down upon.

The Crocodile liked the girls pluck, but it wasn’t going to keep her safe for long.

SNAP!

“Owwwww!!” Asuka cried as the Crocodile bit down on one of her boots pulling it from her foot and causing her to fly up into the air as the Crocodile caught her in his jaws.

Asuka however was able to keep her self in his mouth by stretching her legs out to either side of his jaws as she let out a gurgling scream as the Crocodile slid his pervy tongue against her bare skin.

“SHINJIIIIIII!”

The boy in question was now trying to row towards the redhead as he was fidgeting around trying to get himself ready to row out to save Asuka.

Asuka was also now up in the air, holding open the Crocodile's jaws as she was outside his mouth now.

But the Crocodile simply smacked his tail against Asuka’s bare foot as started snapping after her through the air to the water.

'''SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!'''

The Crocodile then re-emerged from the water with Asuka now lying along his snout as he smiled with delight and licked his lips at the girl.

Just then Shinji showed up in the row boat.

“Asuka!” he shouted seeing the girl in this predicament.

Asuka, now hoping to escape the Crocodile, jumped up onto his back and ran down it leaping off at the tail.

“Shinji!” she screamed out as she leapt toward the row boat.

But before Asuka could land the Crocodile burst out and pushed the boat aside and opened his jaws right below Asuka.

SNAP!

The Crocodile's jaws closed around Asuka as he started chewing her up, loving the taste of her skin.

“Give her back!” Shinji shouted raising the oar above the Crocodile's head just as Asuka swung his jaws apart with even more clothes eaten away.

“SHIN-“

WHAM!

The strength of the oar hitting Asuka sent her back down the Crocodile's throat and sent both of them to the bottom of the sea.

Asuka, now completely naked, then swam up to the surface and jumped out onto the rowboat and shouted "ROW FOR TOKYO 3, SHINJI! ROW FOR TOKYO-"

SMACK!

Asuka hit her head against the entrance to Skull Rock and landed back in the water.

SPLASH!

As Asuka re-surfaced, her face was covered by her sopping wet hair.

As she parted her hair, she screamed in horror as the saw the Crocodile swimming towards her!

"WOAHHHHH!", She screamed as she just barely avoided the Crocodile's snapping jaws and started paddling furiously through the water.

Unfortunately for Asuka, a wave swelled up under her and she smacked against the cavern entrance again.

The Crocodile, seeing this, jumped at the girl and snapped after her as he sent them both through the rock and into the sea on the other side.

'''SNAP! SNAP! SNAP!'''

The Crocodile chased Asuka away to Tokyo-3 as the girl screamed out again '''“SHINJI! WAIT UP, SHINJIIII!”'''

As Mari flew out of Skull Rock, she called out to the redhead in the water, “Hey Asuka! You might want to swim a little faster for the crocodile is feeling extra hungry today!”.

The girl wailed and cried as she continued to dodge the Crocodile's snapping jaws as she was chased away, screaming out all the way "SHINJI! SHINJIII!!!!"

(Footnote: Original story is by Asuka_is_best_girl/swaggersouls68)